I was sitting by myself with my big old spot piano. I played and I remember a lot of memory a sad song and then I heard the piano went different. Then I remembered my wife playing piano with me, she give me a memory so felt sad, then she kiss me on the cheek.
I remembered before I'm a soldier red cross, were in the middle of war, covering in the big wall my friend to me to attack suddenly the bullet of enemy went to his head and I pulled into the wall to covered him and help, I help him but the his head is bleeding and bleeding, he said to me to retreat so I surrendered.
I also remembered my gift to my son, a horse toy, he ride for a minute and he went to me and play with the piano he press the one and I press the one and that's the end of the story.
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ReplyDeleteHi Jullien, I really like your writing. But I saw some few mistakes. First is when you wrote your first sentence, you said "I was sitting by myself with my big old spot piano." Then you said " she give me a memory so felt sad." I think you mean't, she gave me a memory and I felt sad. But anyways I really like your story, but maybe you could check you writing before you post it. Bye!
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