Feed back please!!!
This week we have to do a blog post about Character traits, me and my group are reading a new novel it's called Among the Hidden. This is my work that I had done it's a piece of work for feed back, i'm showing you Luke from Among the Hidden now we're doing finding some more details for character traits and we're about to read chapter 8 to chapter 10 the author of the book is Margaret Peterson.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 6 November 2017
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ReplyDeleteHey Jullien i like the way how you explain the story and maybe next time you can put some pictures but your story is very good keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Julien, I like the way that you explained that you were talking about the main character. Great job.
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