The piano

I was sitting by myself with my big old spot piano. I played and I remember a lot of memory a sad song and then I heard the piano went different. Then I  remembered my wife playing piano with me, she give me a memory so felt sad, then she kiss me on the cheek.

I remembered before I'm a soldier red cross, were in the middle of war, covering in the big wall my friend to me to attack suddenly the bullet of  enemy went to his head and I pulled into the wall to covered him and help, I help him but the his head is bleeding and bleeding, he said to me to retreat so I surrendered.

I also remembered my gift to my son, a horse toy, he ride for a minute and he went to me and play with the piano he press the one and  I press the one and that's the end of the story.

Beyond the Lines

Trip to Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

Trip to Spencer Park

Last Friday Ako Ngatahi travelled to Spencer Park. Then the other class in Hornby

Primary School to have some fun. We split into four group. My group was no 4. When Joshua and I were laughing in the bus we saw a helicopter.

When we are in the Spencer park we split to the four groups and we go first in the playground Lasa,  Jared and Aisa are passing the rugby ball.

After that we had go to the beach to collect some treasure to make a design. I saw a Blue Bottle Jellyfish but I didn’t touch it. We ate our morning tea.

Next we went to lagoon walk and we saw a lot of spider webs and birds. The birds had long legs, long neck the colour is the one is black and the white. I was tired when I was walking in the lagoon walk.

We went back to eat our lunch near the playground. After we ate our lunch we played basketball with South Hornby Primary School. In my team there was Vann, Mikayla, Aisa , Joshua and Mrs. Scott said we gonna go into our spot to and go get our bags and we line up to go into the bus. Axle, Vann and Joshua sitting in the bus.

The Present

W.A.L.T:  Write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.

The Present

The Present

One day I was playing Play station 4,

my Mum came she was carrying a box then Mum put it on the table. mum open the curtains and then it was present, there was a call then while holding the phone she suggested for me to go outside. I open it and there was came a puppy he have black nose  and a saw her legs three because the other one is cut and I kick it and he saw a ball he played it and I kick the ball and he get it in the box and he did know where he going and he bump on the wall until he get out and he run to me and give the ball and I get the ball I said he is funny even has three legs I like him I said to mum "We going outside." By mum I’m going outside with the fluffy dog to play with him.