This term, term 4 we started swimming in Canterbury Swim School. We needed to take a bus, I was sitting with Axle, and Vann, after we take a bus we take out our shoes off and line up. After we line up we went to the changing room to change and once we change we sit in the steps and they said the earth quake drills, they said if we're in the water and theirs earthquake we need to gab the line quickly and if were not in the water we need to hide under the steps, then they called out our groups the I felt excited when where in the big pool we starts swimming my goal is to learnt 1 lap without stopping then the other class went in and change ,after they change they ask my class to change and put our socks on and shoes. When were in the bus I'm sitting with my friend Jared and lined up to go to the classroom.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 17 October 2017
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Hi Jullien great writing I can see you used lots of punctuation Plus you explained a lot in you story and your story was very easy to read and follow and I also like how you put a video to show what you where doing.
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