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Tuesday 25 September 2018

JCJB Sundaes

About 4 or 3 weeks ago we were planning what we're selling on market day and me Jordan Cole and Blake choose sundaes and our ingredients is choc sauce 2 creamy vanilla 100pcs of plastics cups and 25 spoons and Oreos and M&Ms, were doing our sundaes tomorrow morning. I hope you buy our yummy sundaes.
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  1. Anonymous30 October 2018 at 11:32

    Good Job Jullien, you did a great job explaining what you were gonna make, I especially like the part when you said "I hope you buy our yummy sundaes." because it can sometimes attract people. Next time you should add more information on what you are doing because people may not know what you were going to do. Anyways keep up the Great work!

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  2. Tai30 October 2018 at 11:49

    Hi julien, great work I liked how u explained what you where making it for and what the ingredients where for you sundaes. Maybe next time you could write a little bit more and even including a photo plus you could add some puncuation so it will be easy for people to read and in some areas it didn't make sense but overall great writing.

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  3. Anonymous30 October 2018 at 12:03

    Hi jullien its good how you told us all your ingredients and making sundaes was a really good idea but maybe next time you should make something more suitable for the day because it was pretty cold but overall it was really good

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